So yesterday J hands me six pages fresh off the printer and asked me to read them. What is it? Half a Marty Stu/self-insert fanfic set in Nintendo's Legend of Zelda. *g*

It's about as bad as you'd expect it to be, frankly, (although I *have* seen worse on ff.net, and by people older than he is. still, my first efforts weren't any great shakes either-even as an adult.). He asked me for critique, and I stuck to, "Use all that dialogue as an outline, and add action, mood and location." Anything more specific can wait until he asks.

*sniffle* Another writer in the family! Maybe he'll learn to type better than I do...*g*